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Writer's pictureMichael Barnes

You Can't Take It With You

You can't take it with you

Into the next round

These friends you've made

These lives you've led

These truths you spun,

and wove into a web,

then built into a fort.

But somehow it becomes you

And finds a way to come along.

It changes its weight,

Its shape,

Its look.

When it feels like you've lost it,

Lost all that you've gained,

Like that moment of lightness

Right before rain,

It breaks thru

And showers on everything

Clearing the debris

So you can find your way

Thru the gnarling roots

on the path at your feet.

As you step into the clearing

You'll see

You will have what you need

Just when you thought

You had nothing at all.

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Eva Dömötör
Dec 05, 2020

Here I am, a grateful reader, Michael. I enjoyed each line, carried by the ebb and flow of the rhythm, each delivering a tiny surprise with a fresh turn of phrase and metaphor. I will remember this poem that speaks of the kind of achieved moment that enables us to live our lives.

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Cathleen Barnes
Cathleen Barnes
Dec 05, 2020

Love this one. So filled with hope and positivity. ❤️

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